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A black Raoul in the West End Live concert... and he's charming! (And ethnically extremely mixed, I'd guess.)

https://youtu.be/i8O2MRsjz7s?si=NzYqI_uPO9Oxf72-
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I wonder if the reason why so many fans complain that they find Raoul dislikable in the Leroux novel is that this is the experience of being in love for the first time being depicted from the male perspective by an actual male author, whereas what they are used to seeing in romance novels is the male viewpoint as imagined by women? (And why is the fandom so overwhelmingly female and romance-oriented, anyway? The novel wasn't written to appeal to lovelorn ladies -- Leroux was a thriller/mystery writer...)

It also occurs to me that female romance novels normally feature experienced and/or older men as the love-interest rather than very young and inexperienced ones, whom women presumably don't find attractive -- the plot is generally 'woman heals heart of man who has learnt to distrust her sex' or 'woman wins true love from seductive rover', not 'boy falls head over heels in love with someone his own age'. Of course, when you are writing obligatory sex scenes you pretty much need to have a practised male protagonist (unless it is Erik the Masterful Virgin :p)
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For some reason I randomly checked on the Fantome-Stein site (crossover comic in which the Phantom is Frankenstein's Monster, Christine is a Goth chick and Raoul is Ambiguously Brown) tonight, and... after over three years of being "real stoked about the next few pages", the story has finally updated!
https://www.fantomestein.com/comic/chapter-4-page-36
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One weird thing about the characterisation of LND-Raoul -- he *knows* he is behaving badly, he despises himself for doing it, and yet it is *because* he despises himself that he does it; he is trapped in a very recognisably human vicious circle -- is that it is actually an echo of the original Raoul from Leroux's novel, who is a very different character, but shares this trait of finding himself behaving hurtfully towards Christine (usually out of his own wounded feelings), being painfully conscious of this and regretting it even as he is doing it, and yet being seemingly unable to stop.

This is almost certainly a complete coincidence, but maybe it's one reason why I didn't find the character entirely unrelatable...
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I think I've finally worked out the rationale behind the final-act change to Raoul's dialogue in "Love Never Dies", where his insistence that he has bought tickets on the Atlantic Queen, which sails in an hour's time, is changed to which "leaves tonight" (thus removing any argument for Christine to leave with him *before* the performance in order to catch their boat -- there is now no logical reason why she shouldn't be able to have her cake and eat it, by singing for the Phantom and still departing with Raoul afterwards!)

It's because Lloyd Webber now wanted to bring Raoul back for the final scene -- I'm guessing that the assumption was that previously when Raoul leaves in a hurry during the performance he is taking a carriage directly to the docks in order to catch the "Atlantic Queen", and thus would already be on board at the time of Christine's death ;-p So presumably the departure was delayed in order to have Raoul still on hand.

(I don't actually see this as a problem, myself, having already written a story in which Raoul and Gustave leave, have an altercation with the Phantom en route, and *still* catch their boat, albeit by a pier-head jump!)
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When people write High School AU fanfic, Erik is always cast as the sensitive loner and Raoul as the 'jock' with seamless self-confidence who bullies him; from Raoul's point of view, a more realistic rendition would be to cast *him* as the wimpy kid who doesn't know how to handle his crush on that girl from the other side of the tracks who hangs around with all the wrong people. The boy who messes up every time he tries to talk to her and gets generally ignored and laughed at, and who finds threatening notes left on his locker from one of the 'seniors' with a reputation for beating people up in dark corridors and creeping out the younger girls.Read more... )
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There's an entertaining argument that Leroux was consciously inverting the 'Gothic' sterotype: Raoul is the emotional, vulnerable heroine with an excess of sensibility who insists on pushing her nose into mysteries better left unexplored, while Christine is the strong, silent, reliable hero who thinks things through and has a Plan :-
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It's interesting that Raoul in the book is actually dismayed by Christine's uninspired singing -- thus proving that (a) he isn't just some fashionable fribble attending the opera as part of a society ritual but actually cares about music and takes an interest, and (b) he is attracted to her for herself and not for her talent, and thus Erik's contribution has absolutely nothing to do with it :-p

If Christine couldn't sing, Erik would have had no interest in her whatsoever, but she would still be Raoul's long-lost sweetheart.
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I wrote this back on 14 February 2020 on a general writing forum in response to the question of how to write romance: Do you think it's counterproductive to pin down a specific list of "reasons why X loves Y" and vice versa? The thread recently resurfaced, which reminded me of it.

My instinctive response is that this simply isn't the way that love *works*.
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In canon, we don't know *why* Raoul and Christine love each other; there are various reasons why they *might*, but it's not suggested that any of these are the root cause of their relationship. For example, we're told that Christine grows up to be very beautiful -- but we're also told that Raoul experiences this as an impediment to his affections because he is shy and feels he can't aspire to her, rather than her good looks being the cause of his changed feelings. And we're told that they were inseparable as children, but it's when they meet again as adolescents that they become conscious of an extra charge between them, for no specific reason other than that they are older and aware of one another in a different way.

As adults they fall in love from a distance, and without either of them even consciously admitting it to themselves until circumstances in each case force a separate realisation; there is no 'why' or 'why now', there is just a 'now I know' (without being able to do anything about it at that moment, since the plot keeps them apart). Read more... )
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AO3 has been running a meta-essay compilation by writers in the "Phantom of the Opera" fandom where they are given the chance to 'expound' on writing POTO fan-fiction. Some of the questions... reveal quite a lot about the assumptions being made :-D

I sent in a submission last week, but as I haven't received any acknowledgement and the compilation hasn't been updated since the 29th of October, it looks as if it either wasn't deemed suitable or wasn't received -- I rather suspect that this work is based around a Tumblr-centric group expecting submissions via that route, and that the alternative email contact given simply isn't being monitored.

Anyway, I spent several days writing it and then editing it down (and toning down some of my views for Erik-fans' benefit), so here it is my essay, for what it's worth.

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It has just occurred to me that I don't *think* there is actually anything in musical canon to say that Andrew Lloyd Webber's Christine doesn't have a living mother -- just as musical-Raoul can perfectly well have both parents still alive (and in fact movie-Raoul apparently does!) ;-)

It's implied that Christine doesn't have a mother by the fact that only her father is ever mentioned in their childhood reminiscences, and of course it was almost certainly intended that her mother died when she was young because that section is clearly based on Leroux. But I'm not sure that there is any ALW dialogue that would contradict the possibility that Christine in the musical has a dead father to whom she is devoted, but a surviving mother out there somewhere.

(I think the fact that her mother doesn't turn up in the managers' office à la Carlotta and make a fuss when she first goes missing overnight does tend to prove that she isn't *living* with either parent at this point; likewise the fact that she goes to her father's grave when she is in trouble rather than seeking advice from her mother. Unless her mother is as eccentric as Madame Valerius, I think she probably doesn't know what is going on, which implies that she is either shut away in some institution -- an asylum, sanitorium, convent or even a jail -- or else is living overseas or otherwise estranged from her daughter. So from a practical fic-writing perspective it probably isn't all that useful as a plot suggestion...)
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I think my favourite line in Leroux, for no very good reason, is the one that turns out, when I look it up, not only not to be in de Mattos, but not to be in any of the English translations at all (because it was cut from the serialised text before the novel's publication) -- which does at least explain why I could only remember it in French and was looking it up to find out what the English version was!

It's the one brief line Mon Dieu! fit le vicomte... et il s'assit.
https://fdelopera.tumblr.com/post/102057039068/welcome-to-the-30th-installment-of-15-weeks-of

(Leroux-Raoul's reaction to Christine telling him that she loves him: "Oh my God"... and he collapses at the knees :-D)
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vRHgxviZJk

Apparently this was an Internet sensation nine or ten years ago; it's a little bit 'dog walking on its hind legs' for me (the impressive thing is not how well he can sing Christine/Phantom, but that he can sing both roles at all, even if neither is really comfortable), but half the entertainment lies in watching the 'greyed-out' characters reacting to the performance of the currently-featured singer. He does a doe-eyed Christine and a supremely arrogant Phantom (I get the feeling Nick Pitera is not an E/C shipper!)

Raoul spends most of the performance looking worried (and occasionally exchanging a confused glance with Christine), but in fact Nick's voice probably suits this role best -- he's a little lacking in the low notes, but that's less important than when playing the Phantom, while the singer can let his natural light voice ring without needing to go into falsetto.

Perhaps it's unsurprising that he also makes a pretty good Marius in his "One-Man Les Mis" compilation...
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I've always had a problem when writing POTO-based fanfic, in that my instinctive metaphors are all based on Imperial units (inches/yards/miles), and France was metricated by law under the Revolution (although fortunately the attempt to introduce a metric week and the decimal day failed to catch on :-p)

But because I'm familiar with English literature, having characters speak or think in terms of metric measurements in a 19th-century setting feels deeply jarring to me, as it's something I associate with extreme modernity. The result is that I end up trying awkwardly to work my way around the issue altogether, by having characters think in terms of body parts -- which is of course what the Imperial measurements are based on! -- or days and hours of travel, rather than distances.

In an attempt to see how Leroux (who was after all living in a society that had been metricated for over a hundred years) handled the issue in its original context, I searched my download text of the French edition for the string "metre" and couldn't find it at all ... which would help explain why it feels so instinctively wrong to associate Raoul or Christine with metres and centimetres!
The obvious metric reference is of course "Deux cent mille kilos sur la tête d'une concierge"... which is also, it transpires, the *only* occurrence of the string "kilo" in the entire text :-p

Even in the passages where I'd expect to find distances mentioned, such as the description of Box No.5 in Ch7, Raoul's descent from the window of the auberge and his trailing of Christine through the snowy streets, or his journey from the station in the diligence, no actual measurements occur. Very odd. I wonder if this was a conscious choice by the author to avoid being tied down to anything specific, just as he avoids giving any definite dates (but manages to give two mutually contradictory ages for Raoul!), or a stylistic quirk of the era.
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Some of the elements of Erik's character in Leroux are really very reminiscent of Tolkien's subsequent creation of Gollum; the tendency to weep and cringe and refer to oneself in the third person, to giggle in a nasty way, and of course to be consumed by longing for the unattainable within full view, to the extent of commiting murder to get it ;-p
And there's that scene where he paddles away across the lake with only his two eyes visible, which is an almost palpable echo of the subsequent scene in "The Lord of the Rings" where Gollum is spotted in the dusk paddling along after Frodo's boat.

I wonder if Tolkien ever did read "The Phantom of the Opera"? I'm sure there wasn't any direct influence involved (Gollum was created for "The Hobbit", which draws its imagery largely from fairy-tales), but "The Hobbit" was actually written only about twenty years later -- because "Phantom" is a historical novel, one tends to forget that it was written in quite a different era from that in which it was set.

He would have been about twenty and up at Oxford when it first came out, and not really in the right demographic to take an interest in that sort of thing -- by the time the film was made and the story acquired popular traction in the English-speaking world, he was busy making translations from Middle English and probably not an aficionado of Lon Chaney horror movies ;-D So I feel the odds are that he probably never read Leroux...
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Imagine, if you will, an alternate universe where Love Never Dies still exists, but isn't quite like we know it...

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Philippe uses 'tu' to his baby brother and Raoul uses 'vous' back to him in return, which for some reason I find rather endearing as a reflection of their relationship ;-)

Christine calls almost everybody 'vous' almost all the time, like the well-brought-up young lady she is, but there are a couple of points where she uses 'tu' on Raoul in a reversion to childhood, not because she is expressing love for him (she mostly seems to call him mon ami (literally 'my friend') as a term of affection, which really doesn't translate, particularly when Raoul is using it to implore her in tones of despair...) but because she is annoyed with him: "tais-toi donc, Raoul!"

But she also uses it in her relief to find that he is still alive after his sojourn in the 'torture-chamber' ("Raoul! souffres-tu?") where it's clearly from very different motives.

Raoul uses 'tu' to Christine in pathetic appeal during his hallucinations about her in the torture-chamber ("Christine, arrête-toi!... Tu vois bien que je suis épuisé!": Christine, wait! Can't you see I'm exhausted?)

On the other hand, he also does so when he is yelling that he wants to kill Erik when they are on the roof: "Au nom de Ciel, Christine, dis-moi où se trouve la salle à manger du lac! Il faut que je le tue!... oui, je veux savoir comment et pourquoi tu y retournais!", and it is to this that she responds by snapping "tais-toi donc, Raoul" and "puisque tu veux savoir... écoute!" (shut up and listen if you want to know the answer) :-p
But after she resumes her account they are mutually back to using 'vous' again, even when some minutes later she asks him to kiss her: "si je ne vous aimais pas, je ne vous donnerais pas mes lèvres... les voici".

In the final scene I think Raoul uses 'tu' to Christine just once, in the line when he tells her that she should turn the scorpion and save the Opera. 'Va donc, Christine, ma femme adorée': 'go on, Christine, my darling'. But that's about the only time he gets to address her directly; he doesn't call her 'vous' in that scene either ;-)

I think Christine calls Erik 'tu' just once, at the point where she is begging him to swear that it really is the scorpion which will avert the explosion: 'me jures-tu, monstre, me jures-tu sur ton infernal amour' (you monster, will you swear by your hellish love) -- here she is clearly insulting him rather than attempting to appeal to him by addressing him fondly
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I've just noticed a detail that never struck me before about Raoul's rush to Christine's dressing-room after the success of her gala performance. Not only does he have the nerve to take it upon himself to suggest that the room is too crowded and that all 'ces messieurs' (including his own elder brother and the managers of the theatre) ought to be asked to leave, but apparently he actually has her in his arms at the moment when she awakes.

We are told that Raoul arrives in the dressing-room immediately on the heels of the doctor who has been called to attend to Christine, and that Ainsi, le médecin et l’amoureux se trouvèrent dans le même moment aux côtés de Christine, qui reçut les premiers soins de l’un et ouvrit les yeux dans les bras de l’autre; thus the doctor and the lover were at Christine's side at the same time, and she received first aid from the one and opened her eyes in the arms of the other.

Echoes of Raoul's own subsequent awakening at Perros-Guirec, where Christine rushes to revive him after his frozen night, and the first thing he sees when opening his eyes is her worried face bending over him ;-)

When Christine turns her head, perceives Raoul and trembles (which, with hindsight, we know to be due to the fact that she dreads the reaction of The Voice to this inopportune meeting, which she has been trying so dutifully to avoid), apparently she is actually in his embrace at the time... although since he immediately drops to one knee and kisses her hand, I feel that he had probably laid her down in the interim!
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It's just dawned on me that Raoul in the musical is definitely the son of a Vicomte rather than of a Comte -- when we see him in old age at the auction, the auctioneer calls out the name of the Vicomte de Chagny, and whether or not he has inherited his father's title at the time of the main action, he will certainly have inherited it by this point.

(Unless, of course, he does have an off-stage elder brother who in this version is not killed by Erik and peacefully continues the line of Comtes :-p)
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Partial-dress performance (the performers get a gesture at costume; Raoul's coat and Christine's cape).



Bastien is the most delightful Raoul; Read more... )
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